Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

I am loving that it is the female lead who is cold hearted now than the usual cold male lead. Malachi is so funny😍 but Ravina is so refreshing to read as a FL. Jasmine, you always come up with new different characters. Well done and it will be so exciting to see these two vengeful leads

I love this interaction but it leaves me with so many questions!! It borders on playful banter with thick underlying threats that give me shivers! Our princess is such a great character already. I love the scientist side of her. When she first appeared, looking out the castle window, I didn’t have any particular expectation, just that I knew I wouldn’t be disappointed. Trust the author. She has so much personality already! Thank you!! 💗 I’ll be watching for more. 👀

Jasmine, you are a great novelist. Don’t ever forget this fact. I am hooked on reading your work. Please keep writing so I can keep on reading.

Well, I know nothing of course but I did mention last chapter that, enemies as they are, he must know who she is and that she had a twin sister who went missing. You cannot call yourself a king and not know anything about the enemies who “rebelled” against you and hunt you down...Malachi may be beastly, but the man seems smart so far. Just because he looked at her it doesn’t necessarily mean he recognized her. He played her like a fiddle with the breeding and her sister, a provocation for which she fell, ignoring all the other things that he said (while SOME dragons may choose to do it out of revenge, the dragons’ mates are honoured and respected, two different ideas there) ... As for what he said about her sister... he has a point and it is something I commented on last chapter as well... if she is with them, in love with a dragon or not, if she has a child, that puts her in an impossible place. The dragons would not let her go and she probably wouldn’t go herself, putting her child at risk. Her child would not only be in danger for being a half dragon but for possibly having a claim to the throne... Anyway, we shall read on in the hopes to know more. For the time being, despite all the hatred, he makes me laugh and that is good start 😊😅 Ps: I have casted my stones but there isn’t an option for golden ticket just yet.

I love Malachi😍😍, I'm a big fan of characters like his, ones who interact with the female lead even if they are enemies at first, and not ignoring her all the time, like how most of the male leads do! he is growing on me !

Everyone summed up what I wanted to say 🤣🤣🤣 Jasmine this chapter's dialogue is really amazing. 💖💖💖 Malachi and Ravina are so witty.

These two no how to get under each other’s skin. I think when she finally finds her sister she’ll be surprised she is fine and happy where she is. I could picture Corinna being okay with a mate, and that like Malachi said she might not have reached out because she either is with child or has one already. Meanwhile Malachi and Ravina seem perfectly matched in this twisted scenario. They see through each other.

So loving the battle of words! Malachi has met his match (he is amused by Ravina and very smart too,) and so is she. (she can't help but come to him) Maybe Ravina's sister is really happy where she is? Will Malachi be able to escape?

I'm wandering if she is his mate , thanks for the lovely update and the amazing interaction between the two lead

Most of my power stones are placed here and my gold ticket I placed on Heart of Darkness. I am loving your books. With all that said, I am loving how Malachi and Ravina banter back and forth. I wonder if he was surprised that she hasn't tortured anyone or if he already knew she hadn't. I am sure that he is just feeling her out and trying to break her down the same way she is with him. I get the feeling that he came there mostly for her because he wouldn't even talk to them until she came to see him.

I love a good quarrel initially and theirs has really been amusing! I think the harder they fight now, the harder they will fall for one another later. I’m digging that she’s considered a “cold-hearted princess” and as some one else already said, it’s a great change from it usually being the ML. I like that both characters seem witty and cunning. They aren’t even in a relationship yet but can push one another’s buttons so well. Together they are definitely going to set their world on fire and turn it upside down! I‘m also enjoying getting more details on the different dragon clans and would love more details on how they look in dragon form. Very curious if different clans have different unique abilities to them. Keep up the great work Jaz!

One day sh will be his queene

cold princess also a scientist.👌 i loved their conversation when it's not pure hatred. both of them are smart. also seems he's caught on purpose. maybe he'll take her with him when he escapes.🤭

Great chapter jamine cant wait for more chapter

But he is right if she is a breed with the dragon she would come back home because they might kill the baby

They are a match made by the Messengers of God. Two very strong personalities. The female lead is highly intelligent, sassy, fighter and strong. One of the strongest female leads so far.

I can’t wait for more interaction with these two. Clearly Malachi came here / let him get caught and has an agenda. I think the agenda would be to get information from the inside and plan a path to take over the castle and kingdom. But I look forward to the conflict and confusion that will come from more time together.

why can't I post a review?

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