Toni_Glennan
I just want you to change the system from being very talkative and rude to someone who is there to guide him to gain strength - also focus on the trauma of the Mc if he's being bullied having a system won't change his character from 0 to a 100% real quick --------------------------------------------------------------------------- also, don't like when someone talks you put this ( : )it feels like i can't really get myself on the story -------------------------------------------------------------------------- just go crazy with the world and then put some ground rules you want to follow to help achieve what you want from this story