Demonic_angel
Dropping here. The story had a lot of flaws at the beginning, it got a little better when he was betrayed by the family and got out of the cliche a little, and now it got worse with this suicide mission where he doesn't benefit at all. And why was he looking to seek revenge? I mean, I know what happened, but I thought he would have just wiped out his feelings for his foster family. Besides, after he was revealed as "Dark Mage" in his city, why wouldn't he think that the news wouldn't have gotten out and there would be people going to capture or kill him? In my point of view, there are many flaws in the script, unfortunately. Good luck to the author on this journey. Just think more about the coherence of the story.
Ah that's clearly not win-win offer, if gab help this girl, it was one sided merit only for lira, atleast make her subordinate or slave maybe cuz this was suicide mission and that boy was just awakened earlier, if gab accept that makes gab like was fool wants to look cool, i hope gab are more clear minded and wises as anti-hero