Comments of chapter undefined of Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage

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what if gabriels father is a mage of darkness thats why gabriels mother could not join the church of light

although I love this book

I can not tell if we're it said the man did not tie or tired his hair I don't get it its really confusing although it's a good book

Use concise language and don’t give away your punchline. We readers want to ride along for the journey. We don’t want you to tell us what’s happening. Show us through the character’s strict POV, not your own. Don’t ruin the suspense for us. Besides that, you have a wonderful story.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks