Comments of chapter undefined of The Villain's Story

your writing is good..it got me involved in the story..i wont deny- there are mistakes as i pointed earlier ..but which author doesnt make one..just keep on writing ..my advice : dont get disheartened with comments..some or the guy (like me) will keep on pointing wht he/she didnt like..you cant save your plot everytime..best is to make sure the mc is not naive tht he is making mistakes again and again

I hope that these missions would take him a long looong time for him to complete otherwise the mc will get op waaay to fast

Bro am sorry to say this but why does he have to devotee himself to some family

thanks for chap

One mistake is the race change, cuz if he changed into a icechaos hybrid bc of 2 supreme beings, then that would mean the Main character of the novel has been a mix of the fire dragon right????

System is too op

reading these 13 chapters got me hooked now I can't wait for more

Great chapter

Author's writing is good asf

Day 1

Thanks for the chapter 👍

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epic but funny nonetheless I was cracking up 😃

Thx