Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Book of the Wise
HP: The Book of the Wise
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Imma be honest the pace is really dragging at his point. We've had 18 chapters at this point but nothing really substantial has happened in all this time. I get you want to world build and develop the charater but that should be secondary and not at the consequence of story development and pacing. Anyway rant done.
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