Dio_Za_Editor
wow!! that intro was beautiful. very well written. I think, this can be added as the Prologue to the story. It gives us a new perspective on the MC. Author, you really excel at writing JoJo characters. I really feel like I am reading story of a JoJo character now. Before Jouichirou was kinda a JoJo character, but mostly because of his jokes, his JoJo references and his attitude. But, this gives the character that weight and resolve that all JoJo character have. Like Dio Search for Immortality and more power, like Kira disire of a quiet life, like Giornio's dream..