NicholasZZ
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In this chapter it was hard to tell if you switched from first person point of view to a third person point of view. I think you should work on that
thanks for the chapter
Thanks for the chap
I was so lost. The punctuation needs work. I couldnt tell what was going on because I couldn’t tell when he was thinking and when it was the narrator. is it first person or is it third?
Author, you still have written my review yet!!
Please leave a comment and what can be improved in the novel and thanks
