Comments of chapter undefined of The Martial Unity
The Martial Unity
Lord_Streak
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Are you planning to put in actual fights sometime later? don't get me wrong, these are amazing, but I meant something where nearly all the moves are displayed, rather than how it's being done right now, with only a general situation of the battle being told and barely a couple of exchanges here and there(if you get what I mean). Being a novel entirely based on martial arts, I would like to read a fight with the entirety of it being written and told too, ofc, just a wish from a reader, rest it's upto you. Good Luck!
I understand that they are superhuman but going faster than the speed of sound at the first level of power .. isn’t that too much ? When he will be on squire lvl he will be able to go what 3/4 or even 10 times the speed of sound ? Then what about sage level ? He wil go up to light speed ? .. Superhuman, yes, but please, don’t go overboard ..
Lord_Streak:Yeah, I just don't want to be too repetitive. I show a enough of a portion of the fight to reflect the rest until something changes. Or if the fight is ever-changing and every move is important, then I show all of it. but otherwise, these are superhuman fighters, they're very fast and exchange hundreds of strikes, I can't really show all of them, only the ones that are worth showing.
