Comments of chapter undefined of The Martial Unity

this is cliché, what's with, " that hair and eyes is he also a genius... so are you trying to say every persons with rear physical appearance is a genius in the book, I mean you said from what I have read so far from your the first chapter till this one it's obvious is hair is rear but not totally unseen, and does this team mate of his have to think that only geniuses can not be hit

man the writing style is nauseatingly bad

this isn't the worst english i've seen, but there are some rather obvious grammar mistakes that could easily be fixed with a spellcheck or sentence structure app.

thanks for the chapter. iam not good at dogdeball