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Comments of chapter undefined of The Martial Unity

DaoistDaya
DaoistDayaLv3DaoistDaya

Bro. No dad??

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Morty756483
Morty756483Lv6Morty756483

Good grammar, I’m hooked to the story so far

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jayz2484
jayz2484Lv11jayz2484

Descriptions of the places are beautiful. I especially loved the imagery of clouds shielding us from the sun's wrath. I wish for those on hot summer days. 🥵

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SwordCreator
SwordCreatorLv15SwordCreator

pretty interesting so far

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MILARCH
MILARCHLv13MILARCH

thanks for the chapter.

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DevilKing666
DevilKing666Lv13DevilKing666

Wow mc is an orphan

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Farid_Omar
Farid_OmarLv11Farid_Omar

I like it...I like it... I'm impressed so far..good writing..good introduction different from other

Violette_reader
Violette_readerLv12Violette_reader

Those multicoloured hair remind me slighly of anime hair...>_>

Xorrdus
XorrdusLv4Xorrdus

Thank you for providing such a beautiful start to the novel Author!

Sykes_T_J_Hirama
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Jeanne_Tabek
Jeanne_TabekLv3Jeanne_Tabek

id look forward to more chapters same as it started..good novel start

Sithaari
SithaariLv15Sithaari

Your writing is good so far. The story is intriguing.

Snehashis_Das_6926
Snehashis_Das_6926Lv3Snehashis_Das_6926

hehe I am already smelling a regret arc with his birth parents

Pranay_2320
Pranay_2320Lv1Pranay_2320

so far it's really good.

Bakima
BakimaLv2Bakima

Good start

jselvy
jselvyLv14jselvy

I apologize for the long explanation of coinage in the paragraph comments. Sometimes I just can't help myself.