there's nothing wrong with novel,i think people want it to be moving faster so that there is some drama tensions between the main characters . Overall I think your doing great
Do not worry author, I still side with u.. its true that compared to the first novel, this one is a little slow. I think maybe you should try limit the pov of others and focus more on the main leads, then it will be much betterđ„°đ„°
I keep finding myself annoyed with the Annalys charade. Another wonderful story but I miss the two together and wish theyâd find out how wronged they were.
