Aries_Monx
I don't know why, but I really like the comparison to soup. I think it remind me of something but I'm not sure lol. For the dad: I think the memory he was reminded, scared, and angry of was maybe because he also loved someone "lower" than him? But maybe his parent did not let him love her. I think this a lot because of when he stood still and not do a thing. -(Basically, I just think he went through some situation similar). Nice chapter! I really felt the adrenaline in the scenario. (Sorry, I am not very sure if the words I used are right haha. I hope that you who is reading this can understand)