Comments of chapter undefined of My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!

looks good,just don't make mc arrogant young master. Thanks for the chapter ☺️[img=update][img=recommend]

Okay ill be honest. In the beginning it seems like a rocky start. (Referring to this world over and over again and the poor choice of words) I hope it'll get better. But the story so far looks great 👍

There is a lot of switching between present and past tense in the narration. It flows better to stick with one tense throughout when describing things. I marked some in the paragraph comments.

Thanks for the chapter looking forward to reading more 👍

good start

I thought it would be like a independent space

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chap

Where are the dots!!!? (.)

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This novel is promising. This kind of plot is what I enjoy reading these days. Kudos Author![img=recommend]

Interesting 🤔

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