Ramirys
Really like the novel, i have several suggestions 1st - to eliminate the hp \ damage and show it in real like effects, as if were a real fantay world 2nd - i hope mc can gain some unique items, via special quests \ inheritence in the early stage, there is no need for such items to be over powered but rather "special" like grimore, he can use it for long term to learn magic so it wont make him op but help him progress, 3rd - i hope you add some mythical weapons \ monster \ things to the story beyond bloodlines, of course i expect it to appear or mentioned much much later in the story but it in my opinion will add huge mythological feeling to the novel. and finally i have a question, in the early chapters you mentioned vampire bloodline have limitations like cannot use weapons, but this limitations makes it rather wierd unlike weakness to fire\sunlight\sliver weapons are not so much as needed after all vampire nails \ claws \ magic can be used as substitute but the weakness in itself is weird
indeed but to some extent it still lacking for example the symbiosis he in the end want to share with others vampire progenitors which i like but still it reduce what could've been his unique feature in terms of special items to collective progenitors items, i mean expect class & potential of drakula bloodline that may go beyond others i dont seem to recall him having the edge nessecery of an mc to posses over his comrades, after all as progenitors they all might get unique classes so maybe the bloodline is unique but its in potential not something he has now
Ramirys:2. I see this is a comment from earlier chspters so you have probably already seen some of the unique things the MC has gotten