Comments of chapter undefined of Time Gap Queen and the Alpha Apex Predators

Thanks for your honest opinions and your kind words. Minus the mistakes I've made with creating the FL, I'm glad you've been still enjoying it and giving it a fair try. I'm taking notes of the mistakes I made with the FL for another novel will write after the vampire novel is completed. Hopefully, now that she has learned the truth, her character will start to get better. Feel free to let me know if you feel it does or not. You should start seeing some character growth with her and a little with Kai, but his won't fully start until the next novel. The second novel did start if you wanted to add it, it's called: Reign of the Time Gap Queen If you click my profile picture, you can find it under my reading list called: Vampire Novel Series This novel will end at Ch 377 and then the second novel picks up from there.