Darkgod772
I would say try to make use of the system more since other similar novels don't do that. Like maybe the mc can acquire some points that can be invested to temporarily increase his pp size by getting ntred. Or having skill upgrades that gradually increases the level of his skills like stamina or seeing through objects/clothes or hiding ability etc. tl;dr make use of the system fully and i would like to see mc to have some dignity and not be complete beta as in fights and stuff but thats just my thoughts, its your novel you do you. đ