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Comments of chapter undefined of Online In Another World

Online In Another World

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Mysterio2250
Mysterio2250Lv12Mysterio2250

I just recently started this novel and it's just a thought but why not say Emillio when referring to him instead of just "He", its gets kinding of confusing sometimes when it switches from side characters back to main characters with just a "He" difference

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DaoistxbaWyk
DaoistxbaWykLv1DaoistxbaWyk

Tbm acho isso

1yr
Forfixs
ForfixsLv10Forfixs

this scene is not well crafted, it seems very "timely" the arrival of help right at this moment, it could be better constructed if his father's arrival with help gave him the opportunity to escape where he was being held

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antmanFN
antmanFNLv13antmanFN

Rupert sounds cool asf his fighting style sounds cool too

1yr
BooksForLifeBeyond
BooksForLifeBeyondLv4BooksForLifeBeyond

advice when the MC is at his lowest give him the system.

1yr
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