Comments of chapter undefined of LOVE OR DEAL?
LOVE OR DEAL?
_eellaabbee
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It would be great if you put a funny meeting or something interesting interaction between her instead of narrated portion about this Charles thingy. Must interesting to put a dialogue when they meet—just a suggestion.
Jude_K_1656Lv10Jude_K_1656
Yeah, try making an embarrassing or funny meeting interaction; a heated meeting argument, for example, gets the crush's intention, you know... just like in real life. No interaction means no exciting event.
_eellaabbee:I was thinking something similar. Thank you for reminding me. That is something I need to explore. <3