Comments of chapter undefined of The Dragon Queen and her mates.
The Dragon Queen and her mates.
fairytail72
Chapter comments7
I'm trying my best, but I can't like the fmc lol. instead of taking the time to learn about her. she spend time in the castle. she is the strongest. the only reason why she was killed and was able to be murdered outside the castle was cuz she became a workaholic. now, as a new person without the addiction. she is acting as a damsel in distress. she is not weak, physically and wasn't weak mentally in her former world so I don't understand the behavior of the fmc.
it's ok to be afraid cuz it's new, but she is thinking like an old person (50-60) who's struggling with technology cuz they never used it and eventhough there were living with technology around, they worked so much that they wanted to save money and never cared for technology cuz they can go to a customer service and make that rep do and use technology to help them. the fmc read about these type of books so the idea was in her mind and instead of taking advantage to secluded herself to see what she can do to help herself to become strong, she is throwing herself to the mls and when interacting with them she is all not weak, not girly but acting out as a idiot who doesn't know what's what and how to behave as a woman and instead she is reacting as a teenager and a child as "omg a bou touched me, grabbed my head." I dont see her struggling as a woman with her traumas and thinking about her problems or reacting and thinking according to that. I don't see the trauma beside when she is on her own and if it's then when she remembers who she is.
fairytail72:I want to write a weak to strong character given my fl are strong from the very beginning
