Comments of chapter undefined of Beast Evolution

Thanks

interesting so far 🧐🧐

i think one thing real hard is pace too slow people get bored and stop reading too fast and people find it hard to keep up with what is actually happening like in this case 3 chapters ago he was in a standard goblin dungeon than than a grave yard now a ice cave but pacing is definitly the hardest thing to master because it is very based on peoples perspective. The Mechanic i found had optimal pace for me and the same goes for Reincarnated with the strongest system both optimal for me. But with your writing at this point is riding that very fine line between fast and too fast but like i said people have thier own perspective

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