The dialogs are a bit misleading. It's sometime confusing to follow when 1 person end their dialogs and when the next person start. If you end with a quotation mark and start a new one, but it's still for the same person.
Intriguing storyline so far! Well, the characters are still being fleshed out! Are there any likeable people in this world? Should be Lother's first answer he searches out!
