Shane_Town
Hasta ahora me a gustado mejor que tus otras novelas web que tienes la de rápidos y furiosos la lei y deje de leer en capitulo 7 me recordó a las telenovelas mexicanas y la verdad ya no quise seguirle la novela no fue de mi agrado.... con esta novela veo que has mejorado como escritor veo que ya empiezas a tomar tu historia como quieres.... solo espero que no dejes caer este fanfic de tvd....
I still think Kai should get the full chance Harbor experience but hunting demons is okay . before Kai Parker goes adventuring back to Mystic falls town. Although , not banging hot twin sister Jo is understandable, props for hanging out longer than most guys but staying stuck in a prison world will do that do you.Using the magical spell really connected you to Faye and Diana more with unexpected consequences from it instead doing pensive style. Considering that OG Kai Parker did a lot of damage before he turned good ,which Mystic falls gang still didn't trust him then anyways . He shouldn't have wasted his after causing nearly irreparable damage to the gang. although I sympathy somwhat with the prison world,but OG Kai Parker wasn't a nice person unless you could wrangling him pretty well.At least this version of Kai Parker is somewhat happy with our girls .