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Comments of chapter undefined of Eden: Surviving an Apocalypse World

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Eden: Surviving an Apocalypse World

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you didn't really explain Edwards personality or relationship with friends I think. so ending doesn't make a lot of sense?...

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I am planning to use the show don't tell strategy. I don't want to explain everything, I want people to understand... At least, that's what I read that writers should do.

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