Comments of chapter undefined of Rise Of Extincted

maybe also trying to find something online to help, like grammerly etc.

mhm! well I reccomend working on your sentence structure. You have too many commas, run on sentences. What is your first language?

Nice chapter....

okay so!!! YES I reccomend rewriting the past chapters based on what is already there. (If you would like, I can help you with editing) I love the plot, but the structure of the sentences probably does push people away. hmm I like the newer chapters in terms of structure, still not perfect but it's much better than the beginning chapters. I think doing half and half is better, it might kill your motivation if you just rewrite without doing something new. So maybe less new chapters, do chapters less often with some new rewrites over time?

I like it so far, though there is a lack of periods, commas etc. so it's difficult to read as idk where the sentence ends. Etc

Lazy.