PancakesWitch
I'm not a fan of the social commentary. This story takes place ten-ish years in the future but it references things like Covid and PS5 shortages that happened now or recently. I wanna know about how the world is now that it has advanced in technology. I don't want to be told stuff I've heard so much I'm sick of it. It takes me out of it. This world is based on our world but because it's in the future you can still do worldbuilding that is interesting. You've already done it a bit with Nexus Corp showing up and taking over the other gaming companies. Do more stuff like that.