I have to say that I am loving this twist with Dorthea trying to make amends and helping. Well done Author! This adds a lot more depth to the story seeing what actually transpired with her. It’s hard to create a character you love and hate at the same time. You nailed it!
Pupa, are you thoroughly spell checking your chapters before releasing them? I don't mean to be fussy, but there have been so many grammatical errors lately that it's taking me out of the story.