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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

Rain_0
Rain_0Lv3Rain_0

At least use " " for dialogue and ' ' for thoughts...

noname_marco
noname_marcoLv4noname_marco

Bro you keep mentioning your other stories is annoying to keep reading, it does the opposite of what you want. Half of the chapter is filled with you just saying check out my stories and add them to your collections. And get an editor or Grammarly for your chapters. Use punctuation marks too, its hard to read the chapters without them

Deathsreh
DeathsrehLv14Deathsreh

There's no way you can make me believe you have an editor this is more confusing than my english essay and english ain't even my 1st language

octoberwind
octoberwindLv4octoberwind

not even a good story

opnlendayk7019
opnlendayk7019Lv1opnlendayk7019

what good chapters

Anabellaxc
AnabellaxcLv1Anabellaxc

Next

MelanyRivera27
MelanyRivera27Lv1MelanyRivera27

Good

Vincent_Kun
Vincent_KunLv4Vincent_Kun