Crazked_Drake
đ§đˇ I have some tips that might help. Most use the term "point of view", but that doesn't quite fit this story, which seems to always, at least almost always, be told from the 3rd point of view. So how about writing it like this: [So-and-so's perspective] Some random nonsense. ... (Skips at least 2 lines and writes three dots to symbolize that what will happen next is somewhere far away or in a distant time. Specify after the dots.) [Anyone else's perspective] (Skips two more lines and starts another viewpoint.) It can be confusing, but it seems much more enlightening to me than leaving it all to the wind. Not everyone can identify Dianey's characters so easily. I myself don't remember almost any classic characters that weren't very striking, so I personally get very confused. If not for you replying in a comment about the order. Thank you very much for the chapter and I hope to see many more. Ps. Please make longer chapters and release them more often. The story is good but the wait is maddening. đ§đˇ