Godfefe
you know, it would have been better you named and imagined the weapons a lil differently you know? I would have preferred old weapon names to show the contrast of how futuristic has the world become....but the cursed linage and all would have better with old weapon words... for example Jade cutter Verdant Dragon Bone Sword and wanna make it more complex? introduce refinement bof the weapons Alchemist and stuff I will read the second chapter in a while good luck!