Hellblaze
The story is good but the song lyrics are too much tbh and quite distracting would be better if you just leave it at the song name and suggest to listen to it instead of this because if im reading the story then next line is the song i would need to reread the lines again then try to skip the lyrics to be able to picture the story maybe you are going about it like it would be with a movie with BGM but it doesnt do as well in text anyway thanks for the chapter a good work so far