Comments of chapter undefined of Lord Summoner's Freedom Philosophy: Grimoire of Love
Lord Summoner's Freedom Philosophy: Grimoire of Love
Arkalphaze
Chapter comments3
The spirits seem to be tropes , which isn't necessarily bad. It's going to be quite hard to make this piece stand out however. I hope that to enact the freedom saught, the main character isn't forced into altercations. The lilith situation seems like an easy way into the r rated chapters, but I hope that there is fleshing out of characters rathers than being mear personifications of list, nature, swordsmanship, etc.
Sometimes I feel like the authors are very confusing, why can't the characters just be normal? Do you need to be a type for everyone? Too proud, too angry, too much this or that, can't he just be normal and have some personality traits?? does it need to exist on the basis of personality? They end up looking like they were made of cardboard, the author is no longer given freedom on how they would be out of the scene, it's this or that and that's it, anything outside the personality the character is frozen in time out of the scene.
