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Comments of chapter undefined of I Have a Hotel in Another World

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Elliot_Jackson
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This story is good, but I feel as though there should have been a little bit more drama and tension towards the mc, and where they were, I just feel like they were a little too accepting. it was all good though, especially the end, keep up the good work

SovereignKlord
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Yeah, that would make it more natural, I'll try to add that to the story next time