Suiyan
I just have to tell you: your chapters so far are awesome free of mistakes. Be it spelling, grammar or context, it all seems with nothing to complain about as far as I noticed. You would think that this should be expected but in reality it isn't. It's not that I wouldn't be able to continue reading with a few flaws here and there, but I still wanted to point it out. On top of that the story is very intriguing!