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Comments of chapter undefined of Everyone Has a... Crown?

Groblin
GroblinLv10Groblin

thanks

SeaOfMadness
SeaOfMadnessLv12SeaOfMadness

I like how the story is going. Two point I would like to comment on. 1) I hope Liam doesn't become a Mary-Sue omnipotent can do everything kind of protagonist. I would be nice to see him being bad at things like close combat, crafting, cooking, etc. Create the need for him to keep people around and look for new people. From the story so far he looks like a mage. Also adding phobias and psychological quirks sounds fun. 2) I feel the copper, silver, gold thing is overdone. Bartering or using a resource that is constantly in use as currency sounds like it would fit this world more (ex. some stone that is used for crafting as currency, it has an actual use and can be used up outside of buying stuff).

Winzentwinni
WinzentwinniLv15Winzentwinni

I hope they find a use for his friends soon or else the MC will make them disappear in his shadow. It's not that I dislike the progress of the MC but there has to be a great reason why his friends survived till now. I hope it has some connection to the subjects they tought

Facundo_Pelli
Facundo_PelliLv4Facundo_Pelli

Thanks for the chapter!

BrenoBreno
BrenoBrenoLv13BrenoBreno

thanks for the chapter!