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ringfinger
ringfingerLv4ringfinger

What's the deal with all these dots? They're far too distracting (and grammatically incorrect but who tf cares at this point), are you trying to communicate to us in Morse code?

GKDRGKZ_213
GKDRGKZ_213AuthorGKDRGKZ_213

thank you for the feedback, I have read about your concern about my usage of periods. I've been writing the story like that for the past year and didn't get any concerned about it until now hehehe, thanks for telling me. I will try to adjust it now. About the grammatical however, I'm still studying about it so you might encounter a lot of them in the story. thank you for reading hehehe😁~

UndeadLove
UndeadLoveLv4UndeadLove

is the goddess the love interest?

Aaeru
AaeruLv13Aaeru

merci

TATTERWING
TATTERWINGLv14TATTERWING

thanks for the chapter