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Comments of chapter undefined of An npc who just wants to live idling around.

TasohVasseel
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hmmm no need for explicit stuff if ya don't want it in the story, just as good to say they had a rather steamy night or woke up together after a very long and fun night. Just implying they did stuff is usually enough for a more mature story. There are plenty of smut stories for those that need it. though I don't think anyone would say no, if the first time the MC and a heroine did it was a seperate/skippable or spoilered chapter, and then after it was just fade to black.

TasohVasseel
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are you okay? (ಥ _ ಥ)

TasohVasseel
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Dude, it's your story, only listen to criticism if it seems constructive or justified. Even then, this story belongs to you and we only benefit from it. As long as the story is good, people will wait for the sequel even if some seem dissatisfied.

TasohVasseel
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And who was ren's ex again?

TasohVasseel
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thank Chapter

3ddy
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so I don't really get it, is the story gonna continue or are you writing a new novel ?