Comments of chapter undefined of Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
DreamThree
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Dude I can understand the author genuinely trying to make the story more realistic and better with actual supposedly original lyrics [I am not sure ] but its just the lyrics and and emojis with almost no plot it feels like the I have been cheated only the soup with nothing more that kinda felling inside of just him singing it should be more about him writing those songs and people reaction and what not this chapter was just like cotton cand 99% air it's kind disappointing ( again I can understand the hard work of the author but I am not here to read lyrics but actual story I hope you improve on that again I have nothing against you but I need more plot) sorry for any mistakes I am not fluent in English and I am kinda sleepy:)
No I am not saying the mc to stop making songs in the story I am just saying you to stop spending your time on writing lyrics instead use some copyright free music or something idk. I just don't want you make songs for the story and put in story as it feels like filler chapters . what I like about the story is the reaction of the fans; them arguing and being angry on Twitter blah blah blah. what I am saying is instead of focusing on the production part I think you should focus on the reaction of the fans. I also hope you add multiple females lead just for flings or something idk I mean it hollywood ( this doesn't mean ntr) though I like your other fanfic it's more focused on the production part which is interesting but fells pretty repetitive to me it would be better if you show a bit more what fans think about the mc. something like kpop stans and how they support and comment on their favorite bands ( minus the toxicity ofcourse) sorry for any mistake I am not native English speaker
DreamThree:criticism is always welcome and i understand your point, but this is the beginning of the new arc, and I am slowly transitioning the story into a new meta. singing will slowly decrease as he goes for a different path, after all, singing was just to have a minimal fanbase and increase his skill set. And honestly, even I am getting tired of writing songs, it really take a toll on mental health haha. Anyway, I hope you continue supporting me :)
thanks for the chapters... the songs you write are all good... and i have a small tiny tiny request (though it's up to u to take it or not) that plz don't involve MC in a relationship with a girl this early and let him be single... sure u can may be add some fooling around and flirting if u want to add new flavour in story...
