Comments of chapter undefined of Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
DreamThree
Chapter comments24
Dude I can understand the author genuinely trying to make the story more realistic and better with actual supposedly original lyrics [I am not sure ] but its just the lyrics and and emojis with almost no plot it feels like the I have been cheated only the soup with nothing more that kinda felling inside of just him singing it should be more about him writing those songs and people reaction and what not this chapter was just like cotton cand 99% air it's kind disappointing ( again I can understand the hard work of the author but I am not here to read lyrics but actual story I hope you improve on that again I have nothing against you but I need more plot) sorry for any mistakes I am not fluent in English and I am kinda sleepy:)
thanks for the chapters... the songs you write are all good... and i have a small tiny tiny request (though it's up to u to take it or not) that plz don't involve MC in a relationship with a girl this early and let him be single... sure u can may be add some fooling around and flirting if u want to add new flavour in story...
