Comments of chapter undefined of Login in Ben 10 (adaptation, not original)

I know it is very late, but I would have liked that instead of the Omnitrix the protagonist obtained permanent improvements in his human body, Things like telekinesis, super soldier serum, gen X, speed force etc etc. But with the extra ability that the Omnitrix can never copy his DNA.

great start. just don't make the MC get too strong right away, let him progress more slowly.

Honestly at the moment the omnitrix is more of a detriment to him since he just got the system. Now he has a giant target on his back and has to take the role of protagonist

hello bro, I read the original story and a tip for adaptation, I suggest that in the parts where there are enemies you skip a bit the topic of bragging since it is very annoying when reading xd

is the mc and max blood related as the watch has a dna lock which was ment for max to unlock ?

Good Work

My friend, what is the benefit of the login system if you give it the Omitrix? I swear, the topic gets annoying

Ficou melhor que o original👍

Translation could be better. It is still barely readable so it’s alright :)

is this a harem??