Comments of chapter undefined of Hp: The Outcast

If you wanted a third member I would either choose Fleur Delacour, or Susan Bones along with Daphne Greengrass and Victoria Potter.

Thanks for the chapter, i don't have a strong opnion on the third harem member but i would suggest against Fleur because she won't stay in hoghwarts so will be long distance relationship unless is after the seventh year which would be weird wait for all that time

I would say Tonks she's just too cool of a character

I'm enjoying the rewrite/remake so far (first couple chapters). On the topic of the harem, I personally don't have an opinion one way or the other, I just hope the pacing is good and all the relationships feels natural and not forced.

Fleur delacour

No harem is better

Please add Luna to the harem. Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

I'm enjoying the remake so far, so glad it's not speeding up the mc's thoughts anymore, I know it may seem obvious when you're doing something, but it's these little things that make whoever reads it more immersive in the story.

Can you do a face claims chapter for all(not all but important) characters because it would be nice to see what they look like.

Nice chapter

yes make a good harem

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Personally, I absolutely do not like the harem because of the stupid nature of the girls, but if the author can prescribe it normally, then I will accept it. If there is a harem, it is better to remove Daphne, because she is the love interest in almost every Harry Potter fan fiction. Personally, I would like Tonks to replace Daphne, because she is a very charismatic character, but for some reason she is not popular among fan fiction authors.

Victoria who cause I don't remember in the movie series . If you are talking about victorie Weasley I know her

Thanks for the chapter

Tonks and Katie Bell

tnx for chap m8[img=update][img=recommend]

really hope this doesn't have a harem,

hope he is not a muggle lover.