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Comments of chapter undefined of Transmitted into novel with modified plot - NTR'd- FANFIC

Akahime_Y
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thought there was a new chapter but it was just this reupdating

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Why_Me_69
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maybe you could have some kind of lewd competition like a fight or something i want nalan to be humiliated more

Booas_salos
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Public Toilet?

KillerofGods
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Put some impregnation stuff in

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djshwjjsjs
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nalan meng exhibition

Sp0ngeBoB
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Scenes where MC watches and/or is humiliated. Interracial also very hot. Gb too

Kyle_Cunner
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MC watching it and liking it would be hot... also maybe impregnation and MC's family getting involved

Glim_Mars
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Put som impregnation in it

djshwjjsjs
djshwjjsjsLv13djshwjjsjs

share nalan meng with friends for fun

djshwjjsjs
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mc share nalan meng willingly to everyone

Eduardo_Gamer_8035
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Mc's family involved in the plot

Jackbalxk
JackbalxkLv4Jackbalxk

Nalan Meng Yuri scenes haven’t seen Much of those

deviant_lemon
deviant_lemonLv3deviant_lemon

hmm make the seductress thing in nalan make her act more dominant and then make her cuck the mc like a hotwife

hxixjsgdis
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public toilet

Aaron313
Aaron313Lv14Aaron313

semi permanent bulls sounds hot

Ye_Yint_0697
Ye_Yint_0697Lv1Ye_Yint_0697

mc snow maid(i forget the name)sex please

Sp0ngeBoB
Sp0ngeBoBLv4Sp0ngeBoB

More direct cucking scenes would be hot, where the MCs girls get used in Front of himMaybe a Mission where Nalan acts as a 'cleaning Station' in a public bathhouse. Or MC Takes on a Mining Mission and Sees Nalan there as well being used by the miners as a relieve Station as a Mission and MC watches. Or maybe a PP guessing game like you did in the barbarian arc but this time the MC participates too and Nalan notices immediately but still sucks the other guys.

Thicc_PlotArmor
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introduce more partners for mcpartners be more influential nd milfy

Ronald_Cristo
Ronald_CristoLv1Ronald_Cristo

Changing covers and all is fine, but could you give us an update too dear author?

Seng_hour
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eletro_black
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muy bueno