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Comments of chapter undefined of Mr. Fang's Feisty Mistress

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zikadeli
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dear author, your Novel is a good one bowever it is very very very slow paced and filled with unnecessary details and it is making the interest rate dwindle which I know you can still reverse it of you choose too... as it is now the only thing this whole novel has covered is zhang lilings education, marriage and shi weiquian secret, nothing more, should I say your male lead is also boring ND looking like he just settled for his wife? Zhang liling shouldn't do all the heavy lifting of a relationship (all I see is a one sided unrequited love). this is no longer a slow burn I was thinking maybe that's what you want to do. we are almost at 500 chapter and theres no definite plot or progress made, it's making the whole novel a tad bit boring, same with the other new novel, like I said a lot of unnecessary details and very slow paced .. I can't be mistaken cos I know for sure, some people actually jump chapters cos they know what in there already ... I love your books and the way you write, it's very refreshing than most novels here. I usually look forward to all your books and don't miss out on any ... please make this novel beautiful, unpredictable and spontaneous. thank you and keep it up best regards.

Paschalinelily
PaschalinelilyAuthorPaschalinelily

Thank you for the pointers 👍 This is also a reminder for me to put the storyline in place. I appreciate your concern ❤️❤️❤️