Wicked132
Haaa being honest I am not a fan of character development and as I am used to even Mc ruthless, determined, intelligent and powerful I do not like this reading, but if you are a novice reader and you have patience because this reading is very realistic and good so you can continue reading it, because everyone has their tastes and different perspectives.
i) How did the man find him? :- well he could have used his connection and found out about him but he never sold the watch because it was stolen so how did he know he where to find him ii) How did he know when he will arrive at the shop(unless he waited there for one or two whole days) as you said that he was laying low for heat to die down(no pun intended) this are my main doubts and also i think he could have escaped him because he was not waiting for him with his gun outside but inside(seriously no pun intended) and mc had jus exited the ally so he could have escaped inside the ally(ah unless shop was directly opposite the ally) yeah this are the things that didnt sit right with me so i just pointed them out(i also dont know how right i am) [img=recommend]