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Comments of chapter undefined of Hollywood King

Daoist198784
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Why was he talking coldly to the girl Sarah? Couldn't he just ask to leave? Why did you have to ask coldly? I'm just curious

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Abanmagan
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if you are going to do a hollywood novel, please use real people no oc its much more interesting to read

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Devilngle
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the main question please author like MHS don't erase the harem tag

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iLoveHarem_S2
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The MC's eye color could be silver.

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Adelmo_Silva
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I would find this more interesting if it weren't for an alternate universe. It would be more interesting to go back in time and develop the story from there, with people who already exist in real life. I'm saying this because there is already a story like yours here on Webnovel. Also, making the MC be an actor or singer would also be interesting.

Humbuub
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I dislike the MC already, didn't even bother to describe Sarah nor gave her money for a cab home. What a trash.

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MrSrew
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something that can bite in him in the back in the future

DeejaeSutherland
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You should try to fix the way you have things positioned, and your grammar and vocabulary.

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MYTH_
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Thanks for sharing this with us, Author-san. Loved the first chapter!

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tortle
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looks interesting author.

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tegar007
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Come on bro let's goo

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Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13Jheydi327

Bruh.. This is unique anew new... Interesting.. Thanks for the Chapter!!

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MimicReads
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Ty

Insane_Fantasy
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tftc~~~○●

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4Grenhaer

I'm throwing it in the trash because of his name...

Tzel
TzelLv3Tzel

Hello author, I can't believe that you made me reread this chapter, I didn't remember Sarah

Mysteries_
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Exp

SCP_UnKnown
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👍

Rangga_S
Rangga_SLv1Rangga_S

Bab pertama, dan di eksekusi dengan buruk

Devilngle
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the tag has been erases