Comments of chapter undefined of Talent Swallowing System

My expectations from the novel fell. I hated the novel in 2 chapters.

...thought second chapter would be better than the first, I was wrong. super bland in details and just jumping. feels like it started on chapter 100.

Seriously??? This early and we already have a love interest?

I would rather have those info dumps than make us run like a headless chicken and assume uncertain things. Seriously tho, this is a bad way to start a novel.

Expectations slowly dropping :(

bro your details are messy. why would you fast forward 11 years ? why would you not explain things related to your main character , like what is system , what it does ? you shouldn't have skipped 11 years tbh. that is just lame .

I still don’t get it. Is the 11 years after “Toby” was in the box or one year?

meh

So love interest is Naive little fool, who got used & dumped by the Young Master. Not a great start.

Good!

Nooooo, I'm sure it's going to be a rotten useless mediocre future wife

If this wasn't a free read and I was bored, I would have already dropped this one. Probably the worst beginning to any book I have seen so far. What is the point of the author saying that all will.be revealed if no one is around to read it later?

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