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Comments of chapter undefined of Yandere girls surround me

vinit_chaurasia
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update?

Unmasked63
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TheCardMaster
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if the author doesn't reply I leak everybody's search history

Donutsaurio
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thanks for the chapter

_Mimic_
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Maybe focus on developing each character. Like, if they're important harem/ love interests and not just throw away, we could see more of them and their interactions with Rain. I say this because it feels like the only characters we consistently understand and see Rain's interactions with are Riz and Sara/Fluffy. I like Ava and Agatha already so you could revolve the story around them, Rain, Rain's self proclaimed sister, and the oni plot that you've been working on and make things a bit more coherent. Just in my opinion. Not meant as criticism.

frost_bite_8033
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thanks for chapter, cant wait to see what else fluffy will do with rain all to themselves.

vinit_chaurasia
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good chapter