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Comments of chapter undefined of Yandere girls surround me

Alkk
AlkkLv3Alkk

thats warm.

Lord_Sadness
Lord_SadnessLv12Lord_Sadness

Looks good so far! My suggestion is to upload as much as possible and do not underestimate the importance of good writing quality Creating unique settings, characters and abilities is my personal tip, wether you want monster girls or ghost girls uniqueness is great and refreshing for the readers Things like grammerly or google docs are great for fixing spelling mistakes Never give up on your writing if you think of it as more than a hobby and if you struggle to find motivation find a way to reward yourself Welcome to the yandere writer cult!

CoolOp
CoolOpLv15CoolOp

needs some editing but this seems like a neat yandere story, so the first girl eats people huh that probably means the mc will have the most delicious blood or something

BasedOnLuck
BasedOnLuckLv4BasedOnLuck

Looks interesting, thanks for the chapter

godaijn
godaijnLv1godaijn

Blue_Robin
Blue_RobinLv14Blue_Robin

Alright I got all he mistakes

Alex_Terriza
Alex_TerrizaLv1Alex_Terriza

Very good, I have a dark yandere comic n webtoon at the moment and this seems great to read.

_Mimic_
_Mimic_Lv13_Mimic_

Just found this. Some spelling mistakes, but certainly readable and a great setting and first chapter. Do you have a plan as to how often you are planning on updating? TFTC. I shall observe with interest.

_Null_00
_Null_00Lv3_Null_00

I'm liking this here my two stone

Darkmusho
DarkmushoLv13Darkmusho

Thanks for the chapter 😊

Alex081904
Alex081904Lv14Alex081904

Renzairo
RenzairoLv12Renzairo

thanks for the chapter

Samael_illiterate
Samael_illiterateLv3Samael_illiterate

Carrara
CarraraLv1Carrara

did she make that to be a hero for him?

nobu_general
nobu_generalLv11nobu_general

thanks for the chapter 😌