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ClareBear2
ClareBear2Lv14ClareBear2

A merge is the way to go. I hope the merge passes without too much trouble. May be re-name the two territories under one name and move the capital on the boarders of both. Loving this story ๐Ÿ˜

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Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

So sad ๐Ÿ˜ž for Tania and Kinshra. Kinshra I hope you will hang around and support your daughter and son -in-law in this Herculean task.

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riemc
riemcLv15riemc

I could use a clsing scene with i Han to tania in spirit. Or reunion with kinshra when they reunite in the fade. We donโ€™t see this part very much, but this author lets us experience it all.โค๏ธ

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Sacoguns
SacogunsModeratorSacoguns

๐™๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™– ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ก๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™–๐™™ ๐™˜๐™๐™–๐™ฅ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง. ๐™ˆ๐™š๐™ง๐™œ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™™๐™ค๐™ข๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ฃ๐™™๐™จ ๐™ž๐™ข๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™–๐™˜๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™˜๐™–๐™ก. ๐™๐™๐™š ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™™๐™ค๐™ข๐™จ ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ค๐™ค ๐™›๐™–๐™ง ๐™›๐™ง๐™ค๐™ข ๐™š๐™–๐™˜๐™ ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง. ๐™”๐™š๐™ฉ, ๐™ž๐™› ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™–๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™š๐™ฅ๐™–๐™ง๐™–๐™ฉ๐™š, ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™š๐™™๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ž๐™ง ๐™ง๐™ช๐™ก๐™š๐™ง; ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ž๐™ง ๐™๐™š๐™ž๐™ง...๐™ฌ๐™๐™ค ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™–. ๐™Š๐™› ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง๐™จ๐™š, ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™™๐™ค๐™š๐™จ๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™–๐™ ๐™š ๐™จ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™š, ๐™จ๐™๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™š๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ค๐™› ๐˜ฟ๐™ง๐™–๐™ ๐™–. ๐™Ž๐™ค, ๐™ฌ๐™๐™š๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ฎ ๐™ข๐™š๐™ง๐™œ๐™š ๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ฎ ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™š๐™™ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™—๐™š ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™˜๐™๐™–๐™ง๐™œ๐™š. ๐™Š๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™จ๐™š, ๐™€๐™ก๐™ฉ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™/๐™ค๐™ง ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™– ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™—๐™š ๐™š๐™ญ๐™๐™–๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™–๐™ซ๐™š๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ก๐™š๐™ฅ๐™ค๐™ง๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™—๐™–๐™˜๐™  ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง๐™ฉ๐™. ๐™‹๐™ก๐™ช๐™จ, ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™™๐™จ ๐™– ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™™๐™ค๐™ข, ๐™ข๐™–๐™ฎ๐™—๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ฌ๐™ค. ๐˜ผ๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐™ก๐™š๐™–๐™จ๐™ฉ, ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™™๐™ค๐™ข ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง ๐™—๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™จ๐™–๐™ข๐™š. ๐™ˆ๐™–๐™ฎ๐™—๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ฎ ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™›๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง๐™ž๐™ข ๐™ง๐™ช๐™ก๐™š๐™ง ๐™ช๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ก ๐™– ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™ฌ ๐™๐™š๐™ž๐™ง ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ค๐™™๐™ช๐™˜๐™š๐™™. ๐™Ž๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™๐™ค๐™ฌ, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™š๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™š ๐™ค๐™› ๐™‹๐™š๐™œ๐™–๐™จ๐™ž๐™ž ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™š ๐™– ๐™จ๐™–๐™ฎ, ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ž๐™› ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™–๐™œ๐™ง๐™š๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฎ ๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™– ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™จ ๐™ช๐™ฅ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™. ๐™„๐™› ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™š๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™š ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™–๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™จ๐™›๐™ž๐™š๐™™ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ ๐™–๐™˜๐™˜๐™š๐™ฅ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™—๐™š ๐™˜๐™ž๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ก ๐™ช๐™ฃ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ๐™ฉ. ๐™„ ๐™–๐™ข...๐™–๐™จ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™จ๐™š๐™š, ๐™–๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ค๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™–๐™˜๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™š๐™ข๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ช๐™œ๐™๐™ฉ๐™จ!!! ๐™Ž๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ข๐™š๐™จ...๐™ž๐™ฉ'๐™จ ๐™– ๐™˜๐™ช๐™ง๐™จ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™—๐™š ๐™–๐™™๐™™๐™ž๐™˜๐™ฉ๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™–๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฌ๐™๐™ค ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™–๐™—๐™ก๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™จ๐™ช๐™˜๐™˜๐™š๐™จ๐™จ๐™›๐™ช๐™ก๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ฌ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™  ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™ค๐™˜ ๐™ค๐™ฃ ๐™š๐™ข๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ!!! ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ˜”โ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿฅบ

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Anna_S_5453
Anna_S_5453Lv14Anna_S_5453

I hope they will merge the kingdoms. It's only the right thing to do.

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Jan_Pic
Jan_PicLv15Jan_Pic

Well Felis in the end you got what you deserved. Happy to know Elty mother was there for him and Tania. I wonder what Biham other daughter is doing with Felis dead and sheโ€™s stuck with those Alphas lock away in Hydra. Her mother locked in Draka dungeon to die. Itโ€™s a sad time for everyone.

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Wulfluv
WulfluvLv15Wulfluv

I believe Kinshra will join Biham very soon. Hopefully Pegasii will honor her as their queen, even though she was never officially crowned. She should also be buried alongside Biham, if they bury their dead. ๐Ÿ’”

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Kemistics_01
Kemistics_01Lv14Kemistics_01

Biham....adieu ....so much lost and gained.... too pained to celebrate the passing of the kingdom to its heir, Tania. Kinshra....perhaps she lingers and doesn't go to Biham in the fade....

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Jan_Pic
Jan_PicLv15Jan_Pic

I wonder will the other promise husband back home come to visit Kinshra since Biham her mate died. Will that help her snap out of her going to be with Biham. Ummm

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Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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riemc
riemcLv15riemc

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Daoist9FOWB0
Daoist9FOWB0Lv14Daoist9FOWB0

why do they want Elty to suffer the way his parents did.

Hollygolightly
HollygolightlyLv15Hollygolightly

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Sacoguns
SacogunsModeratorSacoguns

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