SpicyDaoist
My friend the author, the events should be a little faster, secondly, the dialogues between the characters should be increased (this is an important thing), and the ideas and conclusions should be reduced (because it takes the majority of chapters now), I hope you will take my comment seriously and good luck, this is the best work I am following right now, because it is deep In terms of construction and main character, it seems that there will be a lot of secrets and amazing events